NonPR

From PuneTech

One of the guidelines for the PuneTech wiki is that the company profiles and product pages should not sound like PR material from the company's website. This usually means that you should avoid use of phrases like "leader in" and "award winning".

If you really think it is important to include this information in the profile, I suggest creation of an additional section "Awards and Recognitions" that lists the awards won (or in case of "recognized leader in", some information about who recognized this, or on what basis you are making this claim) with a link to the appropriate websites.

Also, use of adjectives like "innovative" is not particularly useful. If you want to highlight the innovativeness of a company or a product, it is best to actually list the innovations rather than just claiming that it is innovative.

In general, avoid use of adjectives that are not measurable. If the adjective contains information that you think is important to include, then re-write the sentence so that a specific verifiable claim is made rather than a qualitative adjective.